Sorry it took me a while to read this - I wanted to make sure I was in the right mood.
I love that you're writing for the perspective of a rat! It made things so much clearer when you explained - I was v amused. I also think you summon up this wonderful atmosphere with your long sentences and use of esoteric vocabulary - though at the same time, this can make your fic harder to read.
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Date: 2005-02-10 06:40 am (UTC)I love that you're writing for the perspective of a rat! It made things so much clearer when you explained - I was v amused. I also think you summon up this wonderful atmosphere with your long sentences and use of esoteric vocabulary - though at the same time, this can make your fic harder to read.
Am liking so far - would definitely read more