In the first draft, the revelation came even later, and it was really confusing. I don't know why stepping back a character from the protagonist felt so right, I think it's that it gives me a voice to editorialize in.
The language is *so* me. It's what I enjoy doing, but I am havign to reign it back in in later chapters.
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Date: 2005-02-10 12:05 pm (UTC)In the first draft, the revelation came even later, and it was really confusing. I don't know why stepping back a character from the protagonist felt so right, I think it's that it gives me a voice to editorialize in.
The language is *so* me. It's what I enjoy doing, but I am havign to reign it back in in later chapters.