Yes, that article pretty much covers my objections too. The main thing that kept pulling me out of suspension of disbelief was the repeated cases of A telling B to hide/go ahead in a confusing location and then having no problems finding them again (this is totally a scale problem).
Er, lack of grammar, but hopefully you know what I mean.
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Date: 2016-01-07 01:26 pm (UTC)Er, lack of grammar, but hopefully you know what I mean.
My review at greater length: http://ceb.dreamwidth.org/238788.html