The end of Maurice Saldini

[jack]

I've reached the end of Maurice Saldini: Gothique Investigature. I resolved the suicide on the tower with a lot of theology and some quick action. Though I probably should have a christian beta-reader to check my portrayals of sensible chaplain's and hysterical choirgirl's perceptions of the are-vampires-are-soulless-and-damned question?

The last chapter's always hard, but it came quite easily once I started. The secret was to blend between Rat editorializing as he was transcribing the story 'now', and a celebration of the main characters in the time of the story. I left a number of unimportant things dangling, and tried to make things I wanted to follow up on later seem resolved optimistically, but vaguely enough that they could continue to be mysteries in a sequal.

Unfortunately, that doesn't mean I've finished it, as I still need to do chapter 3. I seem to have spent ages on this now, and it's still only 10k words. When it goes well I write a burst of maybe 1k in an evening, and then spend a week or two not having time.

Chapter 3 is the second one I had the idea for. Maurice is trying to check if Baz (jock student) and Prof. Ashmole (college-president-equivalent) might be vampires, though it's fairly clear they're not. The idea was that he'd bespel Baz to show he was human, but overdo it, and end up with Baz half-fancying him, but he'd use this to good effect by using him as a distraction and bait to check out Ashmole. But I could never decide who's point of view it should be from, and it didn't seem to go well. I'm thinking of variations on the theme. Or I could just drop it (there's other evidence) but that seems a shame.

So when I've re-read it, and decided about 3, it might be ready to share!

Comments

[cartesiandaemon.livejournal.com]

Oh my f*^&ing god. You thought I might actually have meant the film when I didn't specify? What kind of opinion do you have of me? :)

Well, did they mysteriously change size or shape at some point? That would seem to be the clincher.

[nakedtoes.livejournal.com]

Well, we were talking about films! I was trying to give you the benefit of the doubt :)

Yup, they've grown, but she claims that she's just using cunning lingerie. You'd be surprised what a difference a push-up bra can make ;)

I'm scared that I bothered, but here's a link:
http://www.awfulplasticsurgery.com/archives/000245.html

BTW, Drew doesn't have any problems with the links I sent him. Interesting...

[cartesiandaemon.livejournal.com]

But I was just making the point that I liked both Liea costumes and geeky girls in books, but that there was no point using my leverage over your obsession with O'Neill to make you not object to the latter because you'd approve, it was only useful to buy forgiveness for the former. And I thought it was clear that Susan Calvin was an example of the latter, though I didn't phrase it very well.

I'd best not look at pictures of Posh Spice's tits at work. There are limits :) But surely she can't always wear a superbra. And surely she'd've worn one sometimes before. And being her, doesn't she often wear something revealing enough that it's easy to tell?

Drew? Links? What?

[nakedtoes.livejournal.com]

I'm lost and my head hurts. I think I understand, but I'm just going to say "You're a good human being. Go forth in peace." Which makes no sense, but I'm lost, innit?

See, I'm even 'inniting'. Definitely a bad sign

I'd best not look at pictures of Posh Spice's tits at work. There are limits :)

ROFL. She _is_ fully dressed in both before and after pictures, but it is your call ;)

[cartesiandaemon.livejournal.com]

OK, I'll stop explaining.

I did have a quick look. But I wouldn't trust them not to show close-ups, whcih somehow doens't have the right 'working' vibe :)

[nakedtoes.livejournal.com]

Actually, I'm feeling faintly disgusted with myself, having spent a good 15 min looking at pictures of bad breast, cheek and lip implants. I'm sick, sick!

It's a good website for mocking other people, though

[cartesiandaemon.livejournal.com]

Because they're disturbing, or because it's weird to have been looking?

[nakedtoes.livejournal.com]

Um, both? Mainly the latter though. I'm supposed to prefer Terry Prachett to scandolous mags.

No more commenting, I can't take any more! Have a good day

[cartesiandaemon.livejournal.com]

OK, you too. Will read chap in a bit.