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When she handed out bodies there was a great queue of animals at God's door. Only two were late: Man and Fire, dancing together in the sunny meadows of the new Earth. Eventually God came to them and said "You can't go on like this. You need bodies."

Man was taken with his immediately donned it. Fire pouted. "It's heavy and clunky and cold," she said. "Why can't I stay like I am now?" and she danced round God and Man laughing...

The whole story (only 500 words + a couple of author's notes) is in response to a camwriters challenge by Pippa, and posted there at http://www.livejournal.com/community/camwriters/4563.html.

Please direct any responses there.