jack: (dragon/caligraphy)
My dear V,

[Personal introduction omitted]

As I was crossing the Veil Ruginious, I saw an enfolding in the land. It grew naturally from the undulation of the desert, but suggested a sizeable valley where there had been no features before. The shoulders... prevented my seeing what may lie inside. As I moved further, I realised its location was drifting sideways at a fair pace I could barely match.

I estimated the rate of progress from my own stride and it seemed to have drifted round from the veil ecolumbine, and to be gliding promptly back toward life. The movement was never perceptible -- you have seen the veil ruginious? Devoid of firm landmarks, everything shifts in like fashion, but such a definite landmark has never been known...

As I approached the landscape steadied about me... the movement was no longer perceptible, but I knew that if I waited, I would find the landscape I was on closer to life, although that's no guarantee it would be an easier journey for me to return...

I mentioned before I had seen a dearth of souls on a swathe of my journey back from the dark sea... Estimating the geometry as best I could, I inferred that swathe would fall exactly in the shadow of where the valley had been, if it had followed the same curve... I must investigate, yet, feared to leave no mention if I was not promptly able to return; there were a few souls visible before the horizon, and [the end of the message has decayed; cf. the verbal report of the sparrow-soul]
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By the foot of the mountain we were bloodied, dirtied and weary. We had made it to this dangerous place, but... increasing seismic activity. The mountain was constantly shaking, dark dies covered in ash, and wheeling, screeling pterodons... began to split, slabs of rock the size of cities breaking away and sliding down the slopes. Lava oozed between...

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I actually did it. I voluntarily, of my own free will, deliberately installed an mp3 ring tone on my phone. (The voice of the awesome GLADoS computer from PORTAL.) I never thought I would do that.

(And it took about five minutes of fiddling to get it from the computer to the phone to the ring tone selection menu, and next time much less. So, what's the deal with buying ringtones for £1 or more? This idea sort of passed me by, what's it for?)

(Lost world typically represents how I feel about work today. But this is a departure, I felt this apocalyptic climax suited this post :))
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It seemed to be working. We squelched carefully along the bank of the river, avoiding disturbing the long grasses, and unseen by any of the unfriendly airbourne saurians. Ahead, we saw several humanoid figures, conversing by the river, except they had long, muscled tails...
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...plashy, marshy, muddy banks. We squatted and councilled ... The professor began to mould grasses and mud and cane and string and a little bit of sorcery into a model of a small Pterosaur. This lost world was formed by a sufficient impression of will, creating a small veil between the veils Ruginious and Ecolumbine, and like the older veils it drew into it souls of departing dead seeking a path in the afterlife.

Souls suited to it took bodily form here, and only later found that it was a tragic dead-end, giving some respite but leading no deeper into the veils. For a few it was a satisfactory rest, happy to spend the last of their unshed desires here until they dwindled into oblivion, mostly content to have found an acceptable lot. But many seethed with repressed feelings they might have resolved, but called into a savage recreation and parody of a brutal world fed them more and more, becoming the most vicious saurians we had seen.

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jack: (lost world/acd)
[Please pretend there is some sort of framing narrative that justifies the title. Maybe this extract was acquired and tentatively filmed by a low-budget schlock horror director, or something. A day before the travellers reached the lowest grass-covered plain:]

...appeared nearly beneath us, panicking the stegoi. It had been waiting in the cleft of land for days, ready to spring. Now it deftly charged our mounts scattering them.

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In the base of the valley, it opened out into a grass-frond plain. The grass fronds waved level with our heads, and for a moment I thought it would provide a perfect cover, but J. Clive saw out thoughts and shook her head resignedly.

She slipped from her stegoi and stepped across to the beginning of the fronds, and shook them loosely with her hand, and we saw the tops wag violently from side to side. They were elastic, but so light any movement was transmitted clearly to the top, and Clive drew our attention out across the plain.

Small herds of taller herbivores wandered about, mostly armoured hump-backs and stegoi, with some larger beasts ambling purposefully, necks wagging. But in other places the fronds rippled enticingly, tracing the path of smaller creatures (smaller meaning, perhaps only slightly taller than an automobile).

We looked up, and saw pterosaurs gliding back and forth over the grassy sea, and after a moment realised they were tracking these ripples. Scattered tyrannosaurs strode about, singly or in pairs, and we realised they were following the pterosaurs. In the distance, we saw one hunter suddenly put on a burst of speed, and snatch up a giant speck of some grazing animal out of a presumed herd, and above the nearest pterosaurs began spiralling down, Read more... )
jack: (lost world/acd)
Previously we had talked only in the most general terms about who we had been in life, and how we had died. Our memories of travelling toward the valley, toward the looming mountain seemed to stretch back forever, an infinity of existence that never began, all compressed into a finite time. So there was never a good point to start talking about it.

However, as we grew closer to the mountain, it gave us a definite time to start, and one evening, clustered round a huddled camp-fire, the conversation drifted to speculation and we began comparing notes.

Our memories were vague before a couple of months ago, we remembered endless travelling together, but the days blurred into one, and we could find no definite points of correspondence, and the professor deduced that only since then had we really been experiencing time day by day.

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J

Apr. 10th, 2008 12:39 pm
jack: (lost world/acd)
From the first post there were four characters, J Clive, Johnson, the professor, and the narrator. In my mind Janice Clive knew about animals, Johnson was an explorer/hunter and good with the rifle, and the narrator possibly military, at any rate the calmest, the strategist if anyone was, and the one best able to break a raptor's neck.

I'm bad enough at thinking of names to start with, so I deliberately didn't name the narrator, which fed into the slightly other-worldly feel. And also gives people less to remember :) However, last week I had extracts from the professor's diary, and today I had to refer to the narrator, which gave me the problem, by what name?

I could make one up, but it might be confusing and I didn't want to. Any anonymous reference would be appropriate, but what? I could stick to generic references "the wrestler", "the fourth", but that wasn't very satisfying. I could hark back to Three Men in a Boat and use "J", which I liked a lot but was impossible as I already had Johnson and J. Clive and another J would be confusing and ridiculous. I could go with "I" but that would be confusing with the pronoun, or "JJ" or another letter, but none sounded right.

Then I realised I had the perfect out, if I could make the reference appear in one of the elisions. Neat, no?

When I was writing this post, I invented the military connection, which sort of fit, she might not have literally been one when she was alive, but if it comes up again, I think "colonel" fits.
jack: (lost world/jp)
...a foot in the air when they nudged our feet, and Johnson lashed out with the butt of her rifle, raising a fountain of water. But they were curious and playful, eighteen to twenty four inches long, shaped like fish but scaled like dinosaurs. They reminded us heavily of Chinese water dragons, inscrutable, playful, occasionally sinister, but mostly unconcerned with us and wonderful to know will still be gambolling in the streams when...

...the few meats that J. Clive and I agreed might be nutritious and non-inimicable to our existence in this place, but we could not bring ourselves to kill one. We hoped to find one naturally distressed (for however much we liked them, we were very tired of the ephemeral dry rations we had), but... J Clive found a spawning ground. I didn't know, but she convinced us the eggs would be utterly palatable...

...matched no skeletons I could recall from any period, though close to some. We eventually dubbed them pisceosaurs and moved on, remembering them fondly... joked I had permitted them a caviare disregard of etymology, upon which Janice and Johnson set upon her with...
jack: (lost world/acd)
...not even ambulatory, but when we saw it, a vast virulent purplish green cup of leaves squatting on the hillside, oozing noxious vapours, yet surrounded by the lushest... a symbiotic relationship, predatory saurians learnt to deposit the remains of their kills in the digestive juices within, and in return the plant fertilised a vast region around, growing a garden of the most succulent fruits and ferns, a fall-back and source of extra nutrition for the predators, and bait for more prey...

...knew where I had nearly seen one before. I don't think it ever existed in quite this form... but was a curdle of possibilities combined into this nauseating but effective form in this world, complete with evolutionary... had trapped animals and fed them to the thing, and with it farmed the whole floor of the... until it was not clear if they had farmed it or it them... never saw it and passed through only briefly, but when we saw one in the valley, I realised what I had passed near before...

...walk, let alone fly, but like the most oppressive dragons of western history it had learned the art of squatting on a hillside and having people do the dirty work for it... dubbed it a dragon vine and hoped not to have occasion to use the term again... if we should uproot it if we could, and could stand the acids within, but the discussion...
jack: (lost world/jp)
...impressive, if we had heard of any dinosaur, we had heard of the tyrannosaur. Nearly fifty foot high, many of the armoured herbivores were larger, but none... The one that pursued us to the river never came close to us, but it was intimidating from the horizon. When it fixed its eyes on us we shivered and urged our stegoi faster, as though it could close that distance in seconds... We saw one close to only briefly, but the terror will never leave us, we saw it, and then it was on top of us, a twenty foot wide swathe through the trees levelled instantly, and a stegoi hurled into the air and snapped in half in seconds... guts sucked...

...bound by the most forceful souls, they could not support the level of intellect some of the more fleet footed saurians could, but served as terrible command posts, driving the hunt for us on, marshalling scouts into the air and attack raptors into ungainly but deadly ambushes...

...terrifying, but one glance from their eyes had nearly the same effect, you felt that alone could stop you dead... that brutal force of will made us think them the true dragons, but their own name was itself so well entrenched even "dragon" could ne'er displace it.
jack: (lost world/acd)
...never knew what contemporary name these beasts had been classified with, their exterior was overlapping scales, reminiscent of the scales on a bird's feet, or an armadillo or crocodile... except that they were not firmly anchored, and could either lay flat, appearing much as the other scaled saurians or modern reptiles, or be raised away from the body... the erect form looked like hairs standing partially on end... I speculated that it allowed air circulation closer to the skin if the creature became overheated, or served to make them seem larger than they were when threatened, or both...

...The scales were vividly coloured, the bases concealed when they lay flat even more so, so the sight of a Pyranthus flaring his scales was unforgettable, iridescent colours flashed dizzyingly across his body and his head was surrounded in a ruff that was practically a plume...

...They ran on two legs, the legs whirring comically as if they orbited small circles about their knees, except when one was approaching one... could tell it was one of the bipedal dinosaurs, and the rough size, but I discussed it with Clive, dear Janet, and we agreed no residue of the marvellous scales was likely to remain... and of their most astonishing feature...

...a liquid spontaneously flammable in air, we experimented and once ignited it burned with a white fury... of two liquids, one which self-ignited on contact with the oxygen in the air, the other having a high ignition temperature, but which once burning not even immersion in water could extinguish, thus the creature was able to safely expel the mixture from glands under the mouth, but once anything had been doused in the aerosol there was no saving it... the pyranthus feasted on the charred corpse...

...were mostly very pleasant, curious beasts, which never ran with our enemies, but when we came upon a small herd, resting after a hunt of flock of another species we surprised them and several came forward to defend their herd... incantation was able to suck the vitality from the liquid before she was further... did not pursue us as we retreated, but we would surely have been lost if...

...obviously they did not quite breathe fire, but their jet ignited not far from their mouths and to all intents and purposes... not quite avian nor quite reptilian, just as dragons... a pack venting gouts of fire in full display array was a truly impressive sight but... were positively pleasant, one of the sights of the valley we felt would have justified the whole excursion, we respectfully and affectionately called them by the scientific name we had invented, and somehow "dragon" seemed unworthy both to them and the idea of a dragon...
jack: (lost world/acd)
...of all the saurions we ever dubbed "dragon" in some ways the pteranodon was the most appropriate, but the name felt wrong as soon as we used it. As much as the smaller pterosaurs the pteranodon was elegant, and they were all flying lizards really quite large enough to be impressive close to. But none had the majesty or the anger one imagines of a dragon.

Until the end we saw only a few pterosaurs and even the pteranodons seemed to acquiesce to the more forceful land based saurians, content to soar above us and observe, but even in the worst mêlée never became tempted to close with us...

...skimming over the lake, scooping vast fish from the shoals just below the water, the first time we saw any flying saurians in anything approaching a frenzy, but little did we...

...around the volcano, specks of black silhouette wheeling across the dark, fiery sky[1]. By now human and saurian alike could sense things coming apart, and Yeats' poem was high in all our minds. The souls impressed into saurian bodies were starting to dissociate: the pterosaurs had lost their placidity and screamed their despair through the ash, occasionally one maddened creature diving upon our baulking mounts. The soul of the true demon...

...nothing that came in such numbers or moved so lightly in the sky could claim the name dragon, though we all had a certain affection for them. We seemed determined to fit the name to one of the species we saw and other dinosaurs fit a dragon attitude better, even if none had the airborne tonnage the western idea of dragons evoked...

[1] It draws together a lot of clichés, and probably doesn't work for anyone else, as I can't quite capture the feel and haven't given a full outline of the metaphysics of the journey, but the image behind this paragraph was one of the few I've written which have given me shivers.
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Clive's sacrifice bought us another day. I cannot bring myself to write more yet, but her stegion was butchered, but we brought her out, lacking no more then most of a leg and part of a hand. She rides with Johnson, light-headed, and as we rode we mourned her injuries and faithful mount.
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The saurians came upon us on the third day as we passed the stone pillar. Whatever the extensive changes to their social structures and empathy, Johnson observed they seem capable of working together to the detriment of non-saurians.

The pillar rises into the sky like a vast finger, a mystery even to the professor, but it seemed an unspoken inevitability that we would pass near it, and the spell was only broken as we passed through the shadow.

A horde or saurians rushed from dead ground behind the pillar. J. Clive cried to us to run, and we urged the stegia into that steady gallop that is not the most quick, but can be kept up for days. Momentarily united, the horde flowed toward us, the carnivores the froth on the wave. A few gangling ostrich-analogues led the pack, long legs spinning wildly, but the ever-present raptors surged around them, and a Terrible King thundered along in the middle of the pack. Read more... )
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We had travelled for a day across the gentle plains of the valley, sweeping down from the low crests behind us before rising to the dizzying ascent of the craggy sides of the Mountain. I felt Hillary or Scott would have given his life to be where we were going, and yet I think we would have given ours not to.

In the late afternoon of the second day, Johnson's stego crunched something brittle underfoot. She covered us with the rifle, and we al dismounted to examine it.

Kicking aside grass and scrub with our boots, we revealed a vast set of bones. Even to my untrained eye saw they resembled that of a dinosaur forefoot of the more prehensile sort, except that firstly each finger, claw or talon bone (however they would be designated) was the size of a full-grown human, the entire foot being nearly the size of a stego; and secondly, one of the claws was rotated relative to the others, and with a shiver I imagined it closing, the scrape and clack of bone if the vast hand grasped blindly at long-dead prey.

I tuned back in to the professor's lecture in time to hear her confirming my diagnosis. The claw was opposable, and the technical jargon corresponded with that of a dinosaur.

Janice pounced on this weakness, and asked if it was certainly the remains of a live dinosaur, or might have occurred in some other (unspecified) way. But the professor was already busy answering the question.

Directing us to hold ready various tobacco pouches and canteens she had made us each carry, she produced from the packs on her stego a small bird, one of several she had captured and stunned before entering the valley.

Now with a typically academic regret -- I was sure Clive, Johnson or I would not have hesitated -- she efficiently snapped its neck and bashed it against the largest bone.

A flicker of orange and yellow light flared and disappeared, and the bones acquired a faint pearly glow. I was immediately reminded of mystical experiences in the opium dens of the orient, but the reassuring orange glow of the low sun gleamed overhead, and I was forced to admit the professor seemed to have had a point here too.

[Much of the follow paragraphs are smudged, as if the paper was handled brusquely when wet. Some fragments are clear.] ...d ancient race that [....] ...r time the mountain had been a [..] of mystical and [...] continue in the direction a... [....]

[......] shuddered [...] bone swung at [...] ...ggling to raise itself from the gr [...] ...rapped Clive, and Janice and I rushed forward to pry [...] no great sinews to provide that strength but [....]

[.....] ...scattered the ashes of the remains of our last few dinners, [..] the cremated remains of purified saurians [..] flared and went [..] heads to the departing spark of the bird, thanking it for its service.

We stood, breathing heavily, trying to grasp the import of what we'd seen. Clearly for no saurian nor mammal of this region was death the clear-cut dividing line we had come to know. But not even the professor had a clear idea of the differences between the even vaster saurians of legend and those now suffering whatever strange diseases of the mind we had seen.