Nanowrimo

[jack]

5k words in four days. Action, characters, metaphysics, and sex, though never more than three at once.

Comments

[miss-next.livejournal.com]

But presumably not action, metaphysics and sex, since it's very hard to have those without the characters... :-)

5 minute attempt to prove you wrong...

[stephdairy.livejournal.com]

The door crashed in and bullets tore down the hallway, shredding the curtains their blind passion to reach the smooth mahogany clock. Destiny, God, and Newton cried out for them to hit home, and one by one they penetrated the resisting case, moaning against the pendulum and the weights, before hitting home with a triumphant climactic bong.

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Re: 5 minute attempt to prove you wrong...

[miss-next.livejournal.com]

*helpless laughter*

Re: 5 minute attempt to prove you wrong...

[cartesiandaemon.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

I know I can rely on someone else to fill the gap in sex[1] if someone only claims it to be impossible :)

[1] as it were

[cartesiandaemon.livejournal.com]

By that I would mean a scene with action (ie. advances the plot), explains metaphysics, and has sex, but the characters in it are interchangable, as opposed to here, where the scene serves to show some of the women's personality, and to explain what they feel for each other now.

In fact, it's almost all four, but the metaphysics is very sketchy, and it could be trunctated slightly for the benefit of the action.

[rochvelleth.livejournal.com]

You must be missing humour or pathos or both, surely? ;)

I want action, characters and metasex[1] now[2].

[1] NB meta = after
[2] As it were.

[cartesiandaemon.livejournal.com]

I always have humour. I'm consistently laughable. Wait.

The list wasn't meant to be *exhaustive*. Honest.