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So, I was too busy to actually spod about it, other than a constant stream of oblique hints (thank you, cheering section on twitter!) but I did nanowrimo.

I was confident I had MORE time, and ability to schedule a large chunk of time without dropping everything else. But I didn't know if I had enough, or if it was a sensible decision.

But I was excited to try a large personal project and see if I could do it. I've toyed with the idea before, but never felt like it was a serious possibility -- I was always too likely to push myself too hard and flare out, without any ability to pace myself.

I think it was about the most I could possibly manage in a month, without a really significant impairment of work or of all other social things. Not parkinson's law, but that was about as much writing as I could manage in a day, even under good circumstances.

As it happened, the first week didn't really get started, so I ended up writing 2k words a day for the rest of the time, but I stuck to that almost all the way through. And that was usually about right -- I had about that much ideas in my head, and I could mostly go ahead and write them, and after that, I had to *think* about what would happen next.

I really enjoyed the setting and characters, they did often come alive for me (waiting on reports if that actually made it into the fic or not).

When I did pause, it was one of a couple of things. Once or twice, because what came next needed a bunch of stuff to build a story out of (a bunch of characters for the protagonist to meet, or a problem for them to encounter). More often, but less fatally, because what I wanted to happen wasn't clicking, and I had to review what I intended, what was actually needed for the novel, and what I was attached to but could be compromised if it didn't fit.

Many thanks to everyone who expressed an interest in seeing the finished work. I noted everyone down just in case. I am really, really excited to share the novel, and am very serious about getting it to anyone who would like to see. But on balance, it really is better if I fix a lot of minor problems first (things like characters having names Placeholder1 etc :)). That should be fairly easy, but I officially took December as a break where I didn't have to write any more on it :)

Yuletide was comparatively easy afterwards :) I'd already come up with a basic idea, and it took a few evenings rather than just 2 hours to complete 2k words, so a lot slower than one day's nano writing, but still, finished without any last minute panic (go me!)
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For the benefit of aspiring new writers, not excluding myself:

* Bill and Ted are bodacious. An aspect of bodaciousity is appelling each other with every exchange ("That's a rapping observation, CD!" "Right on, Ted." "Egregious, Bill" [everyone makes guitar noises]). However, this is an egregious deviation if you want to make any other work be taken seriously. Time travel is a problem also.

* Don't get distracted *too* much. Every digression I get into turns into another cool story. I should only let this carry me away a finite proportion of the time, else I'll never finish anything. More.

* Pedanticism[1], yay! The new moon is part of an important ritual, and mid-sentence I had to dive to google to see what times of day which moon were visible. (Also, see point 2, sentence 1.) So, the waning crescent is visible just before dawn, isn't it?.

For the benefit not specifically of aspiring new writers, not excluding myself:

* A DVD-R costs about 40p, right? This is a reasonable measure for what movie is worth watching, in some sense? Also, see point 1. Speaking of which (a) Randolf isn't in this movie; That was the *other* time-travelling disrespect of Napoleon and (b) Rufus, however, is way cool.

[1] Mu.
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Let's see who I can be controversial to.

*-nomen

I painted myself into a corner by thinking of a couple of names I liked and then thinking what system could fit them, preferably also:

* Making people be referenced by the same name only
* Showing family ties
* Allowing cool names
* Not being too confusing

I thought "Wow, the linguists will roast me to a crisp for this one" but looking on wikipedia, it seems I've re-invented the roman system, if everyone were in the same clan. That is, people are usually refered to by a cognomen, which is either inherited or adopted, but may also have a praenomen for intimate use and to tell them apart.

Religion

Miracles from gods:

* You can use it as a nice metaphor for miracles from gods or God
* But the whimsical/impotent nature of the god would cast aspersions on God in such a comparison
* Why has Athiest Jack put religion in at all? Because it's cool and I get to explose Issues (TM) :)
* I can use it as an occasional "out" provided it isn't at the end of a story

Fic update

Nov. 8th, 2005 12:47 pm
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Progress

It's not going to be 50k. It might make 30k. I decided to write reasonably self-contained chapters that could in theory be parceled off as short stories, so I can add more.

It's fun, which is good. I keep having ideas, which is good. I keep not knowing what background (both metaphysics and character) I've introduced and not.

Names

Because it's fun, I'll appeal to my friends for names. I'm rather bad at this bit. I have *some* names I love, but tend heavily to the Capitalised Noun sort, because that's easy (as anyone I've DM'd[1] knows.)

Placeholder name: Ice

Eisvale (Eisval) is a city of magi. Ice was apprenticed as a young teenager to a master magus there. She was fascinated by the workings of magic, and learned everything she could.

His other apprentice was Seaflake. They became friends and lovers. However, as a young woman Ice left the city for several years to persue researches across the continent. Seaflake took this hard, it led to a falling out, and eventually a bitter rivalry.

Now Ice is an important magus in the city, but concerned that she seems to be tied there, and that this restricts her true learning. She's briefly corresponded with Gya, and introduced to the story when Gerald appears on her doorstep saying (1) Gya would like to develop a regular trade route between the cities and (2) he left flewt singing lullabies to a cave full of shadow creatures, could she please zot them?

What name(s) should I use?


[1] Any 'o' is entirely metaphorical.

Nanowrimo

Nov. 7th, 2005 02:24 am
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5k words in four days. Action, characters, metaphysics, and sex, though never more than three at once.

Nanowrimo

Nov. 4th, 2005 06:45 pm
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I finished stuff at work and spent an hour writing (mostly abandoning the bit previous). 1300 words. Not very impressive yet, but it feels right, and there's lots more I know what's going to happen. If I can keep this rate up I should have something worth having.

OK, off to meet [livejournal.com profile] rcv1.

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